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Inhale
Enveloped in your bug-spray like cologne
Like a barrier against the un-
Friendly, unsubtle smells of the
World. Inhaling your aura,
Is a haven like no
Other. Sanctuary
lapses when I step out
Of our fading atmosphere.
An apprehensive sense of scent
Rummages through the bland air, searching
For refuge in your bug-spray like cologne.
©2003-2009 ~dr4g0nf1y
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I've always liked guy's cologne that smells somewhat like bug spray. Experimenting with syllables. The structure(shape) of the poem itself kind of represents an inhale, exhale, inhale action.

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nice one lisa, flows realy nice :) (Smile) and i think the pic fits it well. it sorta looks like shes inhaling the cologne :) (Smile)

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February 8, 2003
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